Comic Side story: Uncomplicated, page 4

12th Dec 2014, 12:30 PM in Chapter Four
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Side story: Uncomplicated, page 4
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Author Notes:

rufiangel 12th Dec 2014, 12:30 PM edit delete
rufiangel
This section of dialogue was very hard to write for multiple reasons. It'll be fun to go back to this in the future after the relevant reveals have been made. :)

Comments:

HeSerpenty 12th Dec 2014, 12:43 PM edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
WAIT a second...what are these two talking about?? Lololol it... it can't be what I think...could it? Because that's what you WANT us to think! Or is it... >__>. Egads

So nice to see these babies again! Aaaah the good ship, Caylie (CainXKylie :D)

O, I'm seeing now there is multiple pages this is just the one i came in on. Ahahah omg I'm curious about what he means XDD
rufiangel 13th Dec 2014, 11:54 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Serpy, after reading this comment I totally wished I had started with this page XDDD I am not clever enough to have done that, though!! Boooo

And I hope it wasn't a letdown what it turned out Cain was talking about XD; (though I did kind of take care to make sure everything was still kind of vague)
KAM 12th Dec 2014, 9:48 PM edit delete reply
KAM
:-)
mjkj 15th Dec 2014, 8:15 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
Well, there is really the possibility of misunderstanding in that dialog. Both assuming what the other thinks coming to wrong conclusions...

(and it seems baby has adopted Kylie) :D

rufiangel 15th Dec 2014, 10:15 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
I did ensure this dialogue would be very vague so anyone reading would come up with their own conclusions, so possibly the characters misunderstood one another too. XD; But most likely, they knew what the other was implying, vague though the notions may have been.
mjkj 16th Dec 2014, 1:32 AM edit delete reply
mjkj
if you say so ;) :D
Chris the Blue 16th Feb 2015, 7:39 PM edit delete reply
Chris the Blue
Chocolate covered bacon is just gross.
rufiangel 16th Feb 2015, 9:18 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
I'm pretty sure there's a school of thought somewhere that says, by rule, that bacon goes with anything. XD; But, yes... I concur.