Comic 335 - This changes things

25th May 2015, 6:00 PM in Chapter Five
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335 - This changes things
Average Rating: 5 (14 votes)

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rufiangel 25th May 2015, 6:00 PM edit delete
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Happy Monday! :) I hope you guys are having a good start to the week so far!

Aaand we have another double-page! But it'll be the last double-page for this chapter. XD;; (Seriously, I need to stop!)

Tomorrow will be the last day to pre-order The Lethian novel, so please keep that in mind - the next time I update Serpamia Flare, pre-orders will most likely be closed! >_<)/

Thank you for reading as always, folks! See you on Wednesday! :)

Comments:

mjkj 25th May 2015, 6:02 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
Go, Cain!!!

You got through to her...

So, now it is thawing again...

...but where is ren? ready to cause more mischief?


PS: @alt text: well, warm up would describe it better - since it already is quite cool... '^_^

rufiangel 26th May 2015, 6:21 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Hahaha, indeed the blistering winds have quieted down a little :)

Ren, mischief maker? XD that wasn't how I thought of him as lolol!
mjkj 26th May 2015, 6:39 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
Yup, they have...

Well, he got delegated to cause mischief...


...as for your remark:
<quote Rufi>: Aaand we have another double-page! But it'll be the last double-page for this chapter. XD;; (Seriously, I need to stop!)</quote>
Seriously - not on my account - I could live with all pages being double-pages '^_^

Matt Knab 25th May 2015, 6:24 PM edit delete reply
Matt Knab
Uh oh, now he'll want to abduct BOTH of them!
mjkj 25th May 2015, 7:23 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
Well, I guess he has to take all four of them then - because I doubt that neither Mike nor Nemi would let him only take those two...
rufiangel 26th May 2015, 6:21 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Funny you should say THAT... XDDD
mjkj 27th May 2015, 4:09 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
...and it is funny because...?
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:33 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
You'll see ;)
rufiangel 26th May 2015, 6:21 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Funny you should say that... XD
MST3KFan 25th May 2015, 7:34 PM edit delete reply
MST3KFan
I'd picture some epic uplifting orchestral music going along with this scene if it were animated or something.

Seriously awesome work, rufi! XD
Crestlinger 26th May 2015, 5:06 AM edit delete reply
Got it covered on the previous page ^^
rufiangel 26th May 2015, 6:22 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww yay! XD Thanks so much MST3K for being so encouraging!! X3 <3 really happy to know the pages have come across that way ;w;*
KAM 25th May 2015, 8:56 PM edit delete reply
KAM
:-)
CiciEnixa 25th May 2015, 9:15 PM edit delete reply
CiciEnixa
OMG YESSSSSSSSSS CAIN YOU LITTLE BALL OF ADORABLENESS YOU DID IIIIIIITTTTTTT!!!

*hugs them both*

Also yeah, Madou might be thinking "these two are a package deal, so cute omg" XDDD
rufiangel 26th May 2015, 6:24 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
XDDD ahahahaha Cici-muffin, I was really surprised by your comment at first because of the encouraging scream for Cain XD I think I somehow thought you'd revel in his pain as much as I do ;D
(just kidding <3)
(also stop reading my script)
Nef 26th May 2015, 11:07 PM edit delete reply
Nef

LOL @ "stop reading my script"

I think good writing is a mix of having people experience some "inevitability" on the story (so they feel good about their ability to interpret) and surprising them (so they feel good by experiencing a sense of wonder). I think you have a good balance.

I like when people predict my storyline, even when they are wrong, because I can see what their expectations are.

rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:34 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
I agree, Nef! :) That balance is hard to strike, but certainly a small amount of predictability helps guide reader expectations. X3
Seabiscuit 25th May 2015, 10:18 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Yeeeeee!:D
Gee, I wonder what he says in that blurred out speech bubble. I cannot possibly imagine.;)
Dat Madou in the last panels! Yeah!
Lukkai 26th May 2015, 11:22 AM edit delete reply
Lukkai
On a good screen, you can juust make it out.

I'm not sure it's Cain saying it though. Might be Kylie.

And it's: "I'm sorry."

Edit: And on a further look, I'm actually fairly certain that it's coming from Kylie.
Seabiscuit 26th May 2015, 11:33 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
DAMN YOU'RE RIGHT

Curses

I read it on my phone first so it was way smaller than it normally is hah
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww seamuffin XD <3 to be fair, it wasn't supposed to be too easy to read, lolol XD
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lukkai you win a cookie XD *hands over extra large choc chip cookie*
Lukkai 28th May 2015, 7:39 AM edit delete reply
Lukkai
Yay!

*sits behind cookie and starts nibbling from the top*
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:34 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
XD;; Sorry about the speechbubble confusion!

But yay happy you like the Madou as always XD <333
Rinkel 26th May 2015, 4:17 AM edit delete reply
Rinkel
Aaaaaaaah <3 These pages are so good!!
mjkj 26th May 2015, 4:20 AM edit delete reply
mjkj
So true, Rinkel... :) <3
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:36 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Aww Mjkj XD <3
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww ;__;* <3 thank you so much, Rinkel for being such an encouraging cupcake <333 *huggu*
Crestlinger 26th May 2015, 5:51 AM edit delete reply
'Some people are worth melting for.'
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:36 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
That's probably the most romantic thing a snowman could say to another XD
Headgamer 26th May 2015, 6:19 AM edit delete reply
Headgamer
*The snow subsides and Kylie passes out as Madou walks up behind Cain*

Madou: Hum... looks like I need Cain's Ass in my arsenal. ♪

*Ren appears in front of Cain & Kylie*

Ren: This changes nothing: Cain's Ass is still mine.

Madou: Sorry Ren, change of plans. ☺

Ren: ???

Madou: I need your Prince's Posterior for my own experiments now. Sorry ♥

*Madou teleports the party away*
Lukkai 26th May 2015, 11:23 AM edit delete reply
Lukkai
Ren: What an ass!
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
badum KSH!

*hands over another cookie*
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
XDDD LOL, Headgamer!!

*rewrites script*

XDDD
TheD-Wrek 26th May 2015, 8:02 AM edit delete reply
TheD-Wrek
This Madou guy... Maybe he's not so bad after all? :)
Lukkai 26th May 2015, 11:24 AM edit delete reply
Lukkai
He's just a guy with an agenda.

Granted, that's more dangerous than a girl with a diary.

But not necessarily evil.
Prayformercy 27th May 2015, 10:49 AM edit delete reply
Prayformercy
He lit them on fire. Why are people forgetting this? Hes their enemy and deserves to be stabbed a few more times.
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:38 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lolol mercy XDDD
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:37 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
X3 Maaaaaybeeeee~~~~
JustNoPoint 26th May 2015, 11:29 PM edit delete reply
JustNoPoint
Might I ask of you a small favor? Can you add navigation buttons above the pages as well as below? I only have time to check once or twice a week so I miss updates a lot. And I have to scroll down the entire page to navigate back. Then scroll again. Spoiling the pages I have not read till I find where I was at.
I was 2 pages behind here :P
As for the 2 pages themselves: The art, dialogue and emotions are perfect. It's a very emotional scene and I'm learning a lot from your abilities!
I wonder what Cain whispered and want to see how Kylie will react on next update!
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:40 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Hey JnP! Omigosh I actually DO want to make this change to the website, but I'm not entirely sure how to OTL;;; I'm an idiot with website coding. But I'll try!!

Thank you so much though for your extremely kind comments! ;__;* <3 I am so honoured!

And I'm sorry the next update actually has no Cain or Kylie in it XD;;; soweee
Outlaw 27th May 2015, 9:40 AM edit delete reply
Outlaw
So, I'm gonna be honest with you here... I've REALLY enjoyed this story arc. It's deep, action packed, and stone cold epic. Keep it up, my friend. You da bomb.
rufiangel 27th May 2015, 10:41 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww, Outlaw!! ;__;* <333 I'm so touched! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the chapter so far, it's been a challenging one!!

Thank you so much for always being so encouraging!! *hug*
Damatris 29th May 2015, 9:28 PM edit delete reply
Damatris
Aaaaah! This is so lovely page! I love absolutely everything here. :3
rufiangel 29th May 2015, 10:35 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww Dama-nee! ;w;* <3 *huggu* <333 So touched to hear that!! Yayyy XD <333 thankyew for being so encouraging <333