Comic Side story: Unconditional, page 4

11th Jan 2016, 6:00 PM in Chapter Six
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Side story: Unconditional, page 4
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rufiangel 11th Jan 2016, 6:00 PM edit delete
rufiangel
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Happy Monday, y'all! :)

Today's update is definitely experimental on my end, seeing whether I can pull off action in this style. I hope you guys find that the result works!

The Lethian Knight with the long plait is Lily, and we've seen her just once on this page. The rest - aside from Seia, Kylie and Rince, of course - are new characters~

I got a REALLY cool gift art from the super cute Dollipop (a.k.a. Daps), the talented fairy behind Capsalot:

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<3333 Isn't it just the sweetest Seia sketch?! X3 I love it so much, thank you Dollipop!! ;__;* <333 I am so unworthyyy!

Have a great start to your week, and I'll see you guys again on Wednesday! :D

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Comments:

HeSerpenty 11th Jan 2016, 6:03 PM edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
LOL I love Kylie's little brat face!!! She so cuuute <333

Man I am really loving this style for the side story!
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:24 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lolol, yes, she's pouting hardcore on this page! XD

And thankyew, I'm really glad you're liking the style so far! >3<)/***
mjkj 11th Jan 2016, 6:36 PM edit delete reply
mjkj
Wow...

...and seia just has to show off, does he?
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:25 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lolol, yes! XD though technically he's under orders to set an example here!
KAM 11th Jan 2016, 6:50 PM edit delete reply
KAM
...and then the People for the Ethical Treatment of Monsters showed up to stop Lethians abusing these poor, defenceless creatures. ;-)
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:25 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Wait, is that what happens in RPGs? XDDD
Lukkai 13th Jan 2016, 9:41 AM edit delete reply
Lukkai
Oh yeah!

Those guys give great loot!
KAM 13th Jan 2016, 5:20 PM edit delete reply
KAM
Depends on the sanity level of the GM, or the players. ;-)
Matt Knab 11th Jan 2016, 7:17 PM edit delete reply
Matt Knab
I feel a bit sorry for the beastie. o.O
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:27 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
XDDD I'm really surprised to see two comments about this! I'm very sorry, this comic is not kind to monsters on the field :'D it's got a very RPG take on things!

(also I didn't have the panels to show it but XD this thing is very aggressive so don't worry lolol)
Lamelle 11th Jan 2016, 8:28 PM edit delete reply
Lamelle
woaah *-*
I always love Your action scenes and poses, and this is definetly no exception :3 Looks really dynamic!
Still enjoying this side story too!
And little kylie is adorable! x3
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:29 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww Lamelle, thank you so much!! So encouraging ;3;***<333 action can be so hard, so I'm especially touched!! >3<*** I'm glad you like the side story so far!
CiciEnixa 11th Jan 2016, 10:29 PM edit delete reply
CiciEnixa
lol the little pouty Kylie at the back XD And ooooh, lots of fighting <3 Go Seia!
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 8:31 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lololol yes, little Kylie is very very pouty indeed XD (she probably had that face the whole way there)

I did enjoy drawing this page since it had lots of swinging action in it <333
sketchdoll 12th Jan 2016, 12:44 AM edit delete reply
sketchdoll
You definitely pulled off the action scene! I love love love that second panel! Nice work :)
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 10:57 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Aww, thank you sketchdoll!! ;3;* <333 I'm really happy that you like that panel in particular!! >w<*)/ <333 Action can be so hard so it's so encouraging to hear ;3;* *hugs* <3
TheD-Wrek 12th Jan 2016, 12:53 AM edit delete reply
TheD-Wrek
I can't get over how great this style looks, Ruuf. I love it so much!

Kid Kylie was adorable, young Kylie is cute as well. X)
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:00 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Awww D, thank you!! ;3;* I'm pleased you're happy with this style, sketchy as it is! X3 (Okay, it *might* get sketchier as the pages go on. Maybe. XD;;;)

Kid Kylie is always a peach to draw, this is true... XD;; lol, she's just got such big eyes <3
Seabiscuit 12th Jan 2016, 2:00 AM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
I wish my classes had fun fieldtrips like this~ ;)

(Awwww sweet fanart! ;~;)
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:01 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Lolol! I suppose it's like a safari, except you climb out of the jeep and start swinging your sword at the lions or something.... :'DDD

(<333 ain't it just, seamuffin?? ;3;*)
MST3KFan 12th Jan 2016, 4:10 AM edit delete reply
MST3KFan
Little Kylie just makes for the most adorable pouty faces. XD
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:03 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
I admit that I personally have a lot of fun drawing little Kylie pouting XD *squishes her cheeks*
Outlaw 12th Jan 2016, 9:10 AM edit delete reply
Outlaw
Not only is this side story totally awesome so far... But your action scenes are top notch! I can't wait to see some action in this style in the future.

Great work, my friend.
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:04 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Outlaw, you are always so incredibly kind!! ;3;* Thank you always for being so encouraging! I'm really pleased to know that the action on this page has been received well so far!! :D <333

This style is more work than I anticipated to be honest, despite the sketchiness of it... :'D but I was using it for the side-story to kind of test the waters and see if I can run another webcomic in a similar style to this alongside Serpamia Flare. I'm still undecided XD;;; but thinking about it lots! The positive feedback on this style so far has been very encouraging! ;3;* <3
Lukkai 12th Jan 2016, 1:19 PM edit delete reply
Lukkai
I didn't notice before, but I can see now who Kylie got her styling advive from.

Including her favoured weapon.

And the action sequence works!
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:08 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
:) Lily and others definitely influenced Kylie growing up, as the guild is a rather tightknit group. Her swordsmanship has been gleaned from various knights, while her Lethiace was honed mostly by Seia!

And yay, thank you!! ;3;* I'm glad to know it works!
Lukkai 12th Jan 2016, 1:19 PM edit delete reply
Lukkai
You are a person of your word, I see, Dollipop! :D

Nice sketch indeed!
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:11 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
<333 isn't it just? ;3;* I love it so... *paps kuudere-kun, Seia* XD <3
Crestlinger 13th Jan 2016, 7:04 AM edit delete reply
...not so great a distance there, mind the tail.
rufiangel 13th Jan 2016, 11:14 AM edit delete reply
rufiangel
It's true he's not a huge distance away XD; but I admit a part of this is my fault. I should have thickened the foreground (i.e. Seia) more to note he was further away :'D the dreglyn is quite a bit bigger than the humans!