Comic 005 - You can look now

21st Jan 2013, 11:55 AM in Chapter One
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005 - You can look now
Average Rating: 5 (5 votes)

Author Notes:

rufiangel 21st Jan 2013, 11:55 AM edit delete
rufiangel
At the time I first pencilled these beginning strips back in 2003, I didn't have a clear idea of how armour or weapon design worked. As a result it really, really shows. All I can say is please stick around, because I promise I do improve on this somewhat in future strips. Really.
rufiangel 1st May 2015, 12:01 AM edit delete
rufiangel
This strip has now been replaced with a redrawn strip, as a part of the Redrawing the First Chapter Campaign!

You may view the original version of the strip here!

EDIT: Just read my old note on this, ahahaha. I kept the armour design consistent to what I anchored down from strip 22 onwards for the redrawn pages, phew!

Comments:

YamiSelina 30th Jun 2013, 8:52 AM edit delete reply
YamiSelina
It's a very good thing he didn't look XD
hazardswake 4th Sep 2013, 7:19 PM edit delete reply
The armor design is really cool, though :D
rufiangel 5th Sep 2013, 11:41 PM edit delete reply
rufiangel
Oh, thank you! :3 I never made an armour reference for myself back in the day, so her armour changes practically every strip until I stabilised the design somewhere in the 20s. XD;; Lesson learnt.
TheD-Wrek 27th Jan 2015, 2:19 AM edit delete reply
TheD-Wrek
I think it looks very cute. :)