EDIT: Just read my original comment on this, AHAHAHA! XD; Did I make it better fanservice? I'll let readers be the judge of that, I suppose! XD;;; (As TheD-Wrek would put it: "HD bazongas.")
If I might offer my advice, I think the main thing this comic would need if you redrew it would be slightly less exposition. :P
A lot of what she's saying could be shown with better art, rather than told.
'Specially since she's presumably talking to herself. I don't know 'bout you, but when I talk to myself, it's typically in short sentences, which're usually quite broken up and incomplete.
Ahahaha!! You left comments everywhere you ninja, you! XD;;;
I drew this so long ago I forget exactly what was going through my mind, but probably... didn't want to draw her armour for as long as possible. XD;;;;;; Well, that and fanservice!
A lot of what she's saying could be shown with better art, rather than told.
'Specially since she's presumably talking to herself. I don't know 'bout you, but when I talk to myself, it's typically in short sentences, which're usually quite broken up and incomplete.
I drew this so long ago I forget exactly what was going through my mind, but probably... didn't want to draw her armour for as long as possible. XD;;;;;; Well, that and fanservice!