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Okay, so in the past I've replaced pages when I've accidentally done something like forget Cain's scar or make a major typo, but this is the first time I'm uploading a version because I didn't make something clear enough.
Nemi is getting roasted in that last panel but my first version wasn't clear enough, so I've made it clearer now. Here are comparison panels for those of you who are interested. XD;
Normally I would just leave it but I didn't want people to think Leela would actually hit Ren by accident. >_>;;
So, Nemi (after overcoming the penalty unscathed)
1. got Jinn (his soulstone),
2. kicked ren
3. kicked ren off the cliff (who is probably (hopefully) getting injured by the kick and the drop)
4. nyeh'ed leela
5. severely annoyed leela
6. dropped of the cliff herself
7. possibly got hit by a fireball though hopefully can dodge in midair and ren gets hit - if not I hope cain is fast with the heals... (leela is quite fast getting that scroll out, by the way)
8. lands safely (except for possible burns unrelated to the drop)
Though that last panel looks more like some person being suspended in midair (since leela is standing close to the edge) and must have been so for the time it took leela to ready the scroll... '^_^
Oh, no visible ears at the person hit by the fireball - so, it might not have been Neemi (hopes desperately)
Hahaha, we'll see about Ren. :) I'd say Nemi startled him more than hurt him with that kick, though, FYI. Nemi's strength stat isn't very high. XD;
Leela whipped that scroll out super-fast, yep! :)
And you cannot dodge a fireball mid-air unless you can fly, Mjkj. XD;;; So no, Nemi couldn't avoid getting blasted. Remember how in the RP, when you had a scroll, you didn't have to roll to hit - it was automatic? Likewise, Leela chose her target and the blast was automatic; she didn't have to 'roll to hit'. :)
I apologise for the confusion caused by the last panel. I've fixed it so it's clearer what's happening. Hope that helps!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS PAGE PLEASES ME SO MUCH X'D
I mean I know I shouldn't get too excited lolol.. buuuut its nice to see them getting the upper hand for once!! RUfii you're amazing at these action scenes and your effects so good!
Awww Serpy~!!! *HUG* XD <333 Thankyewwww!! I'm so happy to hear that from ya!! <333 (This page in particular... much grief from me re: the action bits but yay glad to hear it still works!! XD)
Ahck, you must be so busy putting together those assignments for the prom! @_@ Add all the oil dear!! >_<)/ <3
(yes.. yes I am--- bUT HOLY SHIZ I DIDN"T REALIZE NEMI GOT ROASTED D':.. nuuuuu Cain can make her better, right? RIGHT? Right. okay.. *sighs with relief and won't believe otherwise*)
Not really Michael's style (especially in regard to leela) he is too serious for that but that would totally be fit for leela (he nailed leela...) and crack up everybody (and sink leela)...
XDDD Ahahaha, I needed a horizontal drift so if she kicked his butt, it wouldn't have done the trick I wanted XD lol. That and maybe too comic before the serious roasting bit XD
Well she got hit once before by a lava plum and was able to take the hit whitch I assume is more powerfull then a fireball and Cain has been healing her sooo...
Ohh shit that alt text hahah! Awesome! Both these jerks deserve it. Aw man, so awesome. Nemi, I am proud! The stealing of that stone! Yes Nemi, do more things!
But that last panel...Uh oh D:
I hope Cain knows any revive spells, just in case.
Other than that though, Leela currently is in a very, very bad position. And she might have wanted to save that fireball for the hammer coming towards her.
Yayyy, update =)
...though Rufi: please do not stress yourself too much... *hugs* ...take care of yourself...
(yeah, I read your tweets...)
Yayyyy, you go, Nemi!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
I just hope leela missed Nemi and hit ren instead...
1. got Jinn (his soulstone),
2. kicked ren
3. kicked ren off the cliff (who is probably (hopefully) getting injured by the kick and the drop)
4. nyeh'ed leela
5. severely annoyed leela
6. dropped of the cliff herself
7. possibly got hit by a fireball though hopefully can dodge in midair and ren gets hit - if not I hope cain is fast with the heals... (leela is quite fast getting that scroll out, by the way)
8. lands safely (except for possible burns unrelated to the drop)
Though that last panel looks more like some person being suspended in midair (since leela is standing close to the edge) and must have been so for the time it took leela to ready the scroll... '^_^
Oh, no visible ears at the person hit by the fireball - so, it might not have been Neemi (hopes desperately)
Leela whipped that scroll out super-fast, yep! :)
And you cannot dodge a fireball mid-air unless you can fly, Mjkj. XD;;; So no, Nemi couldn't avoid getting blasted. Remember how in the RP, when you had a scroll, you didn't have to roll to hit - it was automatic? Likewise, Leela chose her target and the blast was automatic; she didn't have to 'roll to hit'. :)
I apologise for the confusion caused by the last panel. I've fixed it so it's clearer what's happening. Hope that helps!
So sorry, I did not want to cause more work for you... =(
Poor Nemi... *puts fire out, wraps in cool wet blanket and hugs her*
That last panel though... ! I wonder....hmm. :3
And yeah, I fixed the last panel (as you know XD) so hopefully that clears up any confusion!
I mean I know I shouldn't get too excited lolol.. buuuut its nice to see them getting the upper hand for once!! RUfii you're amazing at these action scenes and your effects so good!
Ahck, you must be so busy putting together those assignments for the prom! @_@ Add all the oil dear!! >_<)/ <3
You're welcome btw! <3
Not really Michael's style (especially in regard to leela) he is too serious for that but that would totally be fit for leela (he nailed leela...) and crack up everybody (and sink leela)...
*gets to the end of the page*
.......... o.o
and you know why...
Hopefully she's is fine.
Once again Nemi MVP.
Nemi isn't as impervious as my readers like to think, let's put it that way XD
(as a side note, that Lava Burst didn't hit Nemi fully - she got out of blast range in time to avoid the brunt of it.)
Maybe for fun I'll put up a poll... Nah what's the point, everyone will vote Nemi lol.
You totally should. ;)
But that last panel...Uh oh D:
Yeah, Nemi got blasted pretty good in the last panel. u_u We'll see how it pans out for her next page...
Ouch.
I hope Cain knows any revive spells, just in case.
Other than that though, Leela currently is in a very, very bad position. And she might have wanted to save that fireball for the hammer coming towards her.
As Mjkj has already pointed out, indeed, Cain does know a Revive spell. So he does have that option handy if need be~
Leela let her anger direct her actions here a bit much, I reckon. She's got issues, to put it lightly! ;P
Certainly time for her to pull a Sir Robin.
Double ha!
Wait, gah!!
It's the double turnaround!!!