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Happy Monday! :) I hope you guys are having a good start to the week so far!
Aaand we have another double-page! But it'll be the last double-page for this chapter. XD;; (Seriously, I need to stop!)
Tomorrow will be the last day to pre-order The Lethian novel, so please keep that in mind - the next time I update Serpamia Flare, pre-orders will most likely be closed! >_<)/
Thank you for reading as always, folks! See you on Wednesday! :)
XDDD ahahahaha Cici-muffin, I was really surprised by your comment at first because of the encouraging scream for Cain XD I think I somehow thought you'd revel in his pain as much as I do ;D
(just kidding <3)
(also stop reading my script)
I think good writing is a mix of having people experience some "inevitability" on the story (so they feel good about their ability to interpret) and surprising them (so they feel good by experiencing a sense of wonder). I think you have a good balance.
I like when people predict my storyline, even when they are wrong, because I can see what their expectations are.
Might I ask of you a small favor? Can you add navigation buttons above the pages as well as below? I only have time to check once or twice a week so I miss updates a lot. And I have to scroll down the entire page to navigate back. Then scroll again. Spoiling the pages I have not read till I find where I was at.
I was 2 pages behind here :P
As for the 2 pages themselves: The art, dialogue and emotions are perfect. It's a very emotional scene and I'm learning a lot from your abilities!
I wonder what Cain whispered and want to see how Kylie will react on next update!
Hey JnP! Omigosh I actually DO want to make this change to the website, but I'm not entirely sure how to OTL;;; I'm an idiot with website coding. But I'll try!!
Thank you so much though for your extremely kind comments! ;__;* <3 I am so honoured!
And I'm sorry the next update actually has no Cain or Kylie in it XD;;; soweee
So, I'm gonna be honest with you here... I've REALLY enjoyed this story arc. It's deep, action packed, and stone cold epic. Keep it up, my friend. You da bomb.
You got through to her...
So, now it is thawing again...
...but where is ren? ready to cause more mischief?
PS: @alt text: well, warm up would describe it better - since it already is quite cool... '^_^
Ren, mischief maker? XD that wasn't how I thought of him as lolol!
Well, he got delegated to cause mischief...
...as for your remark:
Seriously awesome work, rufi! XD
*hugs them both*
Also yeah, Madou might be thinking "these two are a package deal, so cute omg" XDDD
(just kidding <3)
(also stop reading my script)
LOL @ "stop reading my script"
I think good writing is a mix of having people experience some "inevitability" on the story (so they feel good about their ability to interpret) and surprising them (so they feel good by experiencing a sense of wonder). I think you have a good balance.
I like when people predict my storyline, even when they are wrong, because I can see what their expectations are.
Gee, I wonder what he says in that blurred out speech bubble. I cannot possibly imagine.;)
Dat Madou in the last panels! Yeah!
I'm not sure it's Cain saying it though. Might be Kylie.
And it's: "I'm sorry."
Edit: And on a further look, I'm actually fairly certain that it's coming from Kylie.
Curses
I read it on my phone first so it was way smaller than it normally is hah
*sits behind cookie and starts nibbling from the top*
But yay happy you like the Madou as always XD <333
Madou: Hum... looks like I need Cain's Ass in my arsenal. ♪
*Ren appears in front of Cain & Kylie*
Ren: This changes nothing: Cain's Ass is still mine.
Madou: Sorry Ren, change of plans. ☺
Ren: ???
Madou: I need your Prince's Posterior for my own experiments now. Sorry ♥
*Madou teleports the party away*
*hands over another cookie*
*rewrites script*
XDDD
Granted, that's more dangerous than a girl with a diary.
But not necessarily evil.
I was 2 pages behind here :P
As for the 2 pages themselves: The art, dialogue and emotions are perfect. It's a very emotional scene and I'm learning a lot from your abilities!
I wonder what Cain whispered and want to see how Kylie will react on next update!
Thank you so much though for your extremely kind comments! ;__;* <3 I am so honoured!
And I'm sorry the next update actually has no Cain or Kylie in it XD;;; soweee
Thank you so much for always being so encouraging!! *hug*